tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1173456260059938165.post5503732715905450780..comments2023-11-02T01:28:14.306-07:00Comments on Sioux's Page: Rejected--With Lots of Feedback, and Back-of-the Book Blurb #53Sioux Roslawskihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1173456260059938165.post-25976454048906268642018-08-19T20:13:31.712-07:002018-08-19T20:13:31.712-07:00Wow !!! absolutely fantastic blog. I am very glad ...Wow !!! absolutely fantastic blog. I am very glad to have such useful information.<br /><br /><a href="http://wodmvmz.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">ดูหนังออนไลน์</a>vaiyborahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05095754542895387700noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1173456260059938165.post-35344732194011495972017-03-28T14:02:41.044-07:002017-03-28T14:02:41.044-07:00To me, this simply underlines the fact that differ...To me, this simply underlines the fact that different publications are looking for different things. Your story, I have no doubt, is wonderful. The feedback (awesome they give such a thorough critique) is simply guiding you in shaping it to what this particular journal wants. Kudos to you for stepping out of your comfort zone and submitting!<br /><br />Pat<br />www.patwahler.comPat Wahlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01138619912065680084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1173456260059938165.post-76618771805883706762017-03-28T06:40:52.946-07:002017-03-28T06:40:52.946-07:00First off, CONGRATULATIONS!I have never received s...First off, CONGRATULATIONS!I have never received such a thorough commentary about a submission. Obviously your work resonated. Was this the Ferguson piece? I agree, you have a wonderful writing voice and draw the reader in. Revise and resubmit or send elsewhere. That was a gift.<br /><br />And your Elvis blurb made me laugh out loud, because, well, I'll tell you later. Linda O'Connellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15982895073903619018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1173456260059938165.post-28345781756200449812017-03-26T06:16:28.650-07:002017-03-26T06:16:28.650-07:00Lisa--I will certainly revise it... and then look ...Lisa--I will certainly revise it... and then look for another home for it. That wonderful feedback shouldn't be wasted, in my opinion.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1173456260059938165.post-31132846215178428442017-03-26T04:08:10.561-07:002017-03-26T04:08:10.561-07:00Even though your piece wasn't accepted, it was...Even though your piece wasn't accepted, it was good enough that time was taken to offer all that feedback. I hope you'll revise the piece accordingly and then submit elsewhere. The next time may be a yes!Lisa Ricard Clarohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15014582949326182166noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1173456260059938165.post-16762557533843952742017-03-25T21:07:48.353-07:002017-03-25T21:07:48.353-07:00Patricia--I bow down to you. Weaving writing into ...Patricia--I bow down to you. Weaving writing into some classes, such as science, social studies, art--would be easier (I imagine) than infusing it into music classes. (And thanks. I enjoy having this digital conversation with people all over the world.)Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1173456260059938165.post-73649768480739122112017-03-25T14:20:43.633-07:002017-03-25T14:20:43.633-07:00Great feedback, as all have said. Nothing like a p...Great feedback, as all have said. Nothing like a peer-reviewed answer to help us see what others see. When I took "Writing Across the Curriculum"--I taught general music, gifted ed and choir--I used writing quite a bit. Definitely redo your article and send out again. I enjoy your blogs a lot.pat couch lasterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00481753502716119037noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1173456260059938165.post-6236768896170646762017-03-25T12:16:56.376-07:002017-03-25T12:16:56.376-07:00Donna--Thanks. And right back at you, Donna (rock-...Donna--Thanks. And right back at you, Donna (rock-wise). I admire YOU because of your strength, your humbleness and your writing skills.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1173456260059938165.post-60395446118001329012017-03-25T12:11:34.308-07:002017-03-25T12:11:34.308-07:00Cathy--Yes, it's the best rejection I've e...Cathy--Yes, it's the best rejection I've ever gotten.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1173456260059938165.post-56906776423714962282017-03-25T12:10:41.876-07:002017-03-25T12:10:41.876-07:00Val--You are ASSuming I do good deeds...Val--You are ASSuming I do good deeds...Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1173456260059938165.post-12817521392058588792017-03-25T12:09:40.639-07:002017-03-25T12:09:40.639-07:00Claudia--I completely agree. I wish they all could...Claudia--I completely agree. I wish they all could do this.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1173456260059938165.post-9569396660319127622017-03-25T08:15:19.488-07:002017-03-25T08:15:19.488-07:00Sioux,
I admire you as a writer and as a teacher w...Sioux,<br />I admire you as a writer and as a teacher who is passionate about teaching and writing. Getting rejected is disappointing, but, oh, my, what a gift of feedback you received. With your tenacity, I have no doubts you will receive an acceptance.<br />You rock!Donna Volkenannthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04540727800410234483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1173456260059938165.post-26333929311143526062017-03-25T06:41:22.185-07:002017-03-25T06:41:22.185-07:00That kind of feedback is golden--a blueprint for a...That kind of feedback is golden--a blueprint for an article. What a great rejection, Sioux!Cathy C. Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16491874468936336577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1173456260059938165.post-27884552294324537642017-03-24T14:32:54.644-07:002017-03-24T14:32:54.644-07:00That's some great advice you were given. I gue...That's some great advice you were given. I guess Even Steven is making sure you get payback for your previous good deeds!<br /><br />Elvis should just call the tabloids, and tell his story in his own songs--I mean WORDS! Elvis, they'll probably pay you some good money, honey!Valhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13025832536749983018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1173456260059938165.post-48440462662826713632017-03-24T07:37:53.648-07:002017-03-24T07:37:53.648-07:00Wow,such detailed observations...so helpful...know...Wow,such detailed observations...so helpful...know that not all editors can do this, but wouldn't it be helpful if they did? I hope you go back to work and resubmit it again!<br />Bookiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12043111213031211794noreply@blogger.com