I'm Sioux Roslawski and this is my blog about writing, dogs, grown-up children, menopause, the joy of a marvelous book, classroom teaching in general, and specifically, the teaching of writing. You can email me at sroslawski(at)yahoo(dot)com.
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Tuesday, January 11, 2011
A Magpie Tale
Thanks to Magpie Tales, there is a photo or drawing every Tuesday to prod you into writing. Check out the site for many, many interesting takes.
Here is mine:
Dark song,
with low, disconnected chords
played out with a halting limp.
A dirge.
A hymn to play
to honor the dead.
The past is gone,
and life as we know it
will never return...
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Reading this, I can't help but think of recent events in Tuscon. :-(
ReplyDelete...halting limp. Great image for a funeral piece.
ReplyDeleteDeath has been on a lot of our minds lately. Nicely done. And thanks for your comments on mine too.
ReplyDeleteOh dear! Oh dear! I'm sure that can't be right? But it's true with every beat of the clock. It will never be the same....
ReplyDeleteThis is the first of your poetry I've read, and it was worth the wait. Hauntingly beautiful.
ReplyDeleteA dirge, yes. I thought of the people of Toowoomba, in Australia, unprepared for the flood that swept their lives away this week. Some dead, many missing, to add to the growing disaster in Queensland.
ReplyDelete-- K
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
Like Kay, I thought of all the people affected by the floods in Queensland, Australia. Of all those lost. Life changes, never to be the same.
ReplyDeletespme terrible disaster does do this. very painful.. good magpie.
ReplyDeleteSioux, you really are a poet. I loved this piece. I am always fascinated with your photographs. Yes, snow days are treats for teachers, along as they don't exceed the allowable number.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful, sad but true, poem.
ReplyDeleteAnd I loved the quote you left on my blog. It is a keeper. I thank you for that.
This has such weight, so well written.
ReplyDeletewill never return... wow... that is the hardest part :(
ReplyDeleteLovely Magpie!
Love this, the life that we know never to return... great line! Thank you also for stopping and commenting over at my place. I so appreciate it when people take the time to comment and let me know they visited.
ReplyDeleteVery deeply felt..so much about acceptance and moving on...
ReplyDeleteHi Sioux
ReplyDeleteThis is a lovely poem, full of slow sadness.
Thanks for coming over to my blog too. It's the first time I've 'met' you and after reading your profile and studying your blog I think we have quite a bit in common. Hope to see lots more of you.
Hi Sioux,
ReplyDeleteHow moving. Sadly wonderful.
You have a gift.
Donna
Very expressive. The ellipsis at the end is intriguing. Life does go on, if not as we knew it before.
ReplyDeletevery sad and solemn...the one constant thing about life is that it always changes
ReplyDeleteSuch is requiem.
ReplyDeleteI really like "..disconnected chords
ReplyDeleteplayed out with a halting limp.."
The only real constants in the universe are motion and change. I think you've put both together here.
ReplyDeletewow,
ReplyDeletepowerful lines.
lovely tale.
Wonderful presentation of that which never stops - change...powerful and thoughtful piece.
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