The Pyrenees---Southern France

The Pyrenees---Southern France

Friday, January 20, 2017

A Bloody Good Time, A Bee Champ and Back-of-the-Book Blurb # 44

Two days ago my school had a blood drive. The other middle-school teacher and I were in charge. Usually I'm too low (iron-wise) to donate and if I make it over that hurtle, I have wily veins. Some really talented blood-suckers have surrendered (after digging around with their needling ways), so I was upfront. I told them, "I'm a tough stick. Who's the best one with needle?" The woman taking my vitals said she'd take care of me. (She whispered, "I'm the best.") Unfortunately, another nurse tried first, they switched to my other arm and the first woman, the one who claimed to be the best did indeed take care of me. She had to work at it, but she got a donation out of me.

As writers, it helps if we know what we need from our critique partners. Ask for it. Be honest. Everybody's a winner if we get to the finish line... even if we're crossing it next to someone else.

Yesterday my granddaughter won the Spelling Bee, and now heads off to the regional competition (in March, I think). The photo below was taken at their Christmas concert. She's sporting her 50's hairstyle, she loves Frank Sinatra songs and she's unfailingly kind and thoughtful. (I'm just a tad bit proud.)

Don't let yourself get boxed in. Try new things. Keep things interesting. Do something daring.



And now onto the book blurb--

Look at the photo below. That is the cover of your book. You choose the genre. A thriller? A study of mental illness? You decide.

Write an enticing blurb--150 words or less. (The title doesn't count in the word count.) Blurbs are those enticing bits that prod you into buying the book. Sometimes they're on the back cover of the book. Sometimes they're on the inside front cover. What they always try to do is lure you into purchasing the book.

Lisa Ricard Claro was the original creator of this project and has at least 3 published novels under her belt. Not only is she a novelist, she's also a professional editor. Check out her website. You'll find inspiring posts as well as information on her editorial services and rates. 

Include your blurb in a blog post. Include a link to this post. Also, ink your post to Mr. Linky. Mr. Linky is easy. You don't have to buy him a drink or anything. If you've never done it, you'll be impressed with how simple he is. And then, check out the other blurb(s). It's interesting to see the different directions writers take, given the same photo.

The purpose of this exercise is to delve into some fun writing. Perhaps if you took a break from your WIP and worked on something

Here's the book cover and the blurb:


photo by pexels.com
First Steps
Dennis viewed life in thin slices.
Living in his mother’s basement had its advantages, certainly. A full freezer of crab rangoon and corn dogs. A microwave next to his bed and a TV on the other side. Mom did his laundry, his shopping and made sure he never ran out of his favorite candy: Whoppers. Dennis had quite an easy life. He slept in til almost noon every day, watched Judge Judy every afternoon and worked delivering pizzas most evenings.
But lately, he wonders if there isn’t more to life. Maybe there’s an exciting world past his cement walls and cobweb-covered rafters. The things Dennis sees when he stares out his basement window makes him curious.

That next day, Dennis gets up early, grabs a bagel instead of his usual bowl of Count Chocula, and heads outside…
… to see what he’s been missing all these years. (147 words)


And if you're Val, and you need to work ahead because every week you write pun-filled book blurb "reviews," here's the photo for next week:

photo by pexels.com

16 comments:

  1. Love your granddaughter's "do" and her individuality! She will blaze her own trail, for sure! I have never given blood, my veins will not cooperate! I always ask for the most experienced "sticker" and they always end up using the tiniest butterfly they have. You need a large gauge needle to donate.

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    1. Kathy--I know how you feel. You have to trust the professionals, but sometimes, they don't know what they're doing.

      I guess your veins and my veins are related...

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  2. Congrats on your granddaughter's achievement. She is cute. love her shirt, too.
    Your character sounds like a family cousin I know. Didn't end well because his mother ended every relationship for him.

    Dracula called.

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    1. Linda--I shudder to think you have a cousin like that. Occasionally, truth is stranger than fiction.

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  3. And she has a beautiful smile too!!!

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    1. Claudia--Thanks. Yes, she's a cutie (if I do say so myself).

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  4. Congrats to your granddaughter! She really rocks that hairstyle!

    Can I move into Dennis's mom's basement now? I know what he's been missing, and I won't miss it at all. I like crab rangoon and corn dogs and Whoppers...

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    1. Val--I know. Sadly, I'd be happy with the basement life (as long as I have lots of books and TV) and I'd love the diet as well (except for the corn dogs... I'm not too fond of anything on a stick).

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  5. Congrats to your granddaughter! I hope Dennis finds that their is life outside the basement!

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    1. Pat--Thanks... and I imagine Dennis will find something interesting outside of his mother's basement.

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  6. Your granddaughter is adorable AND smart. Good luck to her as she climbs up the spelling bee ladder.

    I don't care for Whoppers (I know, I know...*hands head*), but a steady diet of crab rangoon would be okay with me. Does his mom need another woman around the house? :)

    Thanks again for the links love and for plugging me shamelessly. I adore you for it. xo :)

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    1. Lisa--Thanks. I think so too. :)

      A steady diet of crab rangoon... Oh... For a moment, my mind drifted off into a food fantasy.

      And you don't need to keep saying "Thanks." It's just the truth.

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  7. I want to try that 'do...I wonder how it'd look on me? (Congrats to her! Probably takes after her brilliant grandmother!)

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    1. Cathy--I don't know... Her mom is super sharp, as well as her dad.

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  8. Congrats to your granddaughter! She is darling, and obviously a smart kiddo to boot. Future writer, maybe?

    Pat
    www.patwahler.com

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    1. Pat--Thanks. Actually, she DOES have some writerly gifts, but is usually too shy to share her writing with anyone. Hopefully she'll become more open soon...

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