She watched the waves, and thought how comforting it would be to succumb to their embrace.
All it would take is a small shift, and she'd vanish.
No one would miss her...
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Hauntingly sad and beautifully written.
ReplyDelete"no one would miss her". that's sad.
ReplyDeleteI like your story (even if you did go over the 140 character limit...LOL)
ReplyDeleteI wonder how many people think of disappearing that way...I hope that lady changed her mind in the end...
Have a great week. Cheers!
I'd miss her and I don't even know her. Sad!!!
ReplyDeleteSomeone would miss her. She would likely be surprised if she knew who. People rarely know everyone they impact.
ReplyDeleteSad, how many people feel like her, I wonder... Well done!
ReplyDeletethis is great one, but so sad! I hate to think that some people actually feel this way....
ReplyDeleteAah...so sad, but a great MM :o)
ReplyDeleteIsn't it sad that some people really are like this. How sad but a wonderful MM :) Have a great rest of the week :)
ReplyDeleteHow sad that she's even considering such a thing :(
ReplyDeleteWell written, you captured the feeling.
Drowning not waving... Very sad, but very well written.
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Wow! Beautiful. Sad. Unfortunately so true about so many...
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