The Pyrenees---Southern France

The Pyrenees---Southern France

Thursday, March 10, 2016

Back-of-the-Book Blurb Friday # 5

       Whew! It's been five weeks since I began attempting to breathe life into Lisa Ricard Claro's Friday Book Blurb. (Lisa is currently on a intergalaxy book signing tour. This prompt was her brainchild decades ago, but she is now way too busy with her 3-novel set, and had to let it go.)


      The guidelines are easy.


  • Use the photo as the front cover of your prospective book. What kind of book is it? You decide. It could be a mystery, a romance, a serving of chick lit, a nonfiction piece. It's all on you, baby.
  • Write a blurb that is 150 words or less (not including the title). Tightening it and making it compelling is what this exercise is all about.
  • Speaking of exercise... Doing push-ups and crunches is not fun, but this is supposed to be enjoyable. Don't sweat over it.
  • After you've written your blurb, post it on your blog. Then, link your post to this post, using the agreeable (and easy) Mr. Linky. (I've seen Mr. Linky's name on the wall of a public bathroom wall. The graffiti artist noted: You can do it with Mr. Linky. And you can. It's very simple.)
  • Check out the other blurbs. You'd be surprised at the varied blurbs that are inspired by the same photograph.
  • The photo for the next week will always be at the end of the post, so you have time to consider it.
  • photo by Lynn Obermoeller
   
          Here is my blurb:


Tuesdays With Lori

Often, Lori would be seen aimlessly wandering the streets of her hometown. By the time she was 19, she still had never been kissed. Never had a job. Never ventured past the city limits of Highland.

But on a fateful Tuesday, she sat on a bench for a moment... and that moment changed Lori's life forever.

In front of her, on a stone wall, appeared a screen. It was as if a private movie was playing just for Lori. A giant cardinal came into view, and he was talking to Lori. He spoke of his hopes and his dreams, and then cocked his head and listened as Lori poured out the contents of her heart.

Lori started coming every Tuesday. Passersby walked past the bench—but only Lori could see the bright red bird. How long will their friendship last? And how does Lori's life change--forever? (146 words)

If you have time to participate this week, have fun with it. It's a way to stretch your writing skills. And never forget--size does matter when it comes to book blurbs. No one will buy a book that has 1,000 words crammed onto the back cover.





Here is next week's photo. It will be posted on 3/18.

photo by Lynn Obermoeller








14 comments:

  1. The picture this week left me brain dead. I just can't relate to anything other than the red and it isn't giving a story. But you did wonders with it, Sioux!!! How creative you are. I am more and more locked in a narrow road of thought...maybe this age. But your mind is a free bird!

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    1. Claudia--The choice of the picture--it's probably due to my quirky taste. Hopefully the next photo will inspire you.

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  2. I see what you did there!

    I think our fake books should be one of those over-sized hardbacks that could actually let the coffee table lay on IT. Then it would have room for 1,000 words on the back cover. And all of my glowing reviews...

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    1. Val--Those reviews are glowing alright. Glowing like Chernobyl once did...

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  3. Blogger isn't liking me much. Can't seem to get my post to publish. Can't even review it. But once I get it up, I'll be back and post my name on Linky wink. I love what you did with this blurb. It's hard to detach from the photo (when it's your photo), but... I liked what I came up with... well for me anyway. But I LOVE yours.

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    1. Lynn--Many times, Blogger doesn't like me. I loved the photo, so if the blurb is even mildly amusing, it's because of the picture...

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  4. I liked your blurb, and the picture is quite interesting! I kept thinking it was some kind of strange mirror image of her.

    Pat
    Critter Alley

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    1. Pat--I know. I thought the same thing. Like two cardinals having a conversation.

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  5. I guess my blogpost was stuck or something. I redid it and then it worked. Who knows. Good ole Internet and technology.

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    1. Lynn--That link is sometimes persnickety... Now I'm headed to your blurb.

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  6. I loved your blurb! This photo really had me stretching out of my comfort zone. But after I finally got it, I felt better. Kind of like hard exercising! LOL

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    1. Pat--Thanks. If you wrote a blurb, I'll have to check it out. ;)

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  7. You tapped into my love of Tuesdays with Morrie. :) Your blurb is a cool premise that could lead to all sorts of wild things---a government mind control program, an alien communication, an elaborate hoax...the list is endless, really. If you turned this into a full length novel, where would you go with it?

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    1. Lisa--Probably to a dead end. ;) YOUR ideas, however, hint at the limitless possibilities.

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