The Pyrenees---Southern France

The Pyrenees---Southern France

Friday, December 2, 2016

Writing Winners, the Best Brownies, and Back-of-the-Book Blurb Friday #37

      I have a class full of winners... in so many ways.

      Seventeen out of my twenty-two students made their 5,000-word goal on Wednesday. They were incredibly proud. The other five have until Monday (I gave everybody some extra time) to finish up.

      I asked, "How many thought I was crazy when I said you had a 5,000-word goal?" (Everyone raised their hands.) "How many thought it was impossible?" (Again, they all raised their hands.) "How many are so proud of what you've done?" (A sea of hands went up.)

      Next week is the fun. We'll print up the stories and put them into several binders, so the kids can read their peers' work...

      While I'm writing this, I'm letting some brownies cool. Tomorrow after school is a work get-together, and these brownies are always a hit... and so easy.

  • 4 giant milk chocolate candy bars (I use Choceur brand ones from Aldi's. They're each 5.29 oz.
  • 1 family-size brownie mix (a mix that fills a 9 x 13 pan)
Line a 9 x 13 pan with parchment paper. Spray non-stick spray on it. Line the bottom of the pan with the chocolate bars (You might have to cut some of them up to make sure the whole bottom is covered. No bare bottoms allowed!) Make the brownie mix as directed, then pour it over the candy bars. Bake according to the mix. Cut into small squares (they're rich) and watch them disappear.

And now onto book blurb business...
  • Look at the photo below. That is the cover of your book.
  • You choose the genre. A horror novel--Cujo the Sequel? A doggone sweet tale? You pick.
  • Write an enticing blurb--150 words or less. (The title doesn't count in the word count.) Lisa Ricard Claro was the original creator of this project  and this past summer, her third novel Love to Win debuted. Now she's working on her fourth novel. Check out her website. 
  • Include your blurb in a blog post. Include a link to this post. 
  • Link your post to Mr. Linky. Mr. Linky is easy. You don't have to buy him a drink or anything. If you've never done it, you'll be impressed with how simple he is.
  • Check out the other blurb(s). It's interesting to see the different directions writers take, given the same photo.
  • And have fun with it. Think of it as a way to take a break from the truly important writing you do... like a bit of a warm-up.

      Here is the book cover and my blurb:





Bartimer the Baller

Bartimer loves his balls.
Tennis balls. Rubber balls. Basketballs that bounced into his yard, much to the dismay of the kids next door… Bartimer loves them all.
Unfortunately, his obsession gets him into a world of trouble with his owners. He punctured an exercise balance ball in his eagerness to embrace all things round. He decimated the baby’s nasal syringe.
They’re tired of the dog constantly pawing at them when he’s ready to play. Ping pong balls. Softballs. Golf balls. None of them are safe with Bartimer around. His family’s so fed up, they decide to sell him.
But then a company contacts the family. They want Bartimer to be their spokesperson. They want his drooly mug splashed all over the city.
What is the product this mutt might be hawking? And will his family keep this future commercial star for their very own? (144 words)



And for those who like to work ahead, here's the photo for next week:




19 comments:

  1. Hope to see the ads on TV. Bartimer seems to be having a ball with life!

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  2. Your students are so fortunate to have you as their teacher. Coming up with 5,000 words is an incredible feat--even for adults. And you do have a way with chocolate!

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    1. Donna--Thanks. I think I am the fortunate one. They're incredible students.

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  3. Sounds like you've got an awesome bunch of kids!

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  4. Wow! 5,000 is a great accomplishment. You're getting them started on the right track!

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    1. Stephanie--It IS something they should be proud of.

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  5. Sounds like Bartimer's got that ball problem licked! He might be the next Morris the Cat. So to speak...

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    1. Val--Licked? What an interesting choice of verbs...

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  6. Oh those brownies sound delicious. And 5,000 words is quite a feat. You may only teach these kids for one year, but you have planted a seed and will be remembered. And that dog with his balls in his mouth, oh yeah, there's a story!

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    1. Linda--The brownies ARE delicious, and soooo easy (to eat... difficult to resist).

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  7. How exciting for your students! I'll bet you've inspired more than one of them to continue writing.

    Pat
    www.patwahler.com

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  8. Oh, that made my writing heart sing. :-)

    Also, I'm drooling a little.

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    1. Cathy--I assume the puddle of drool is because of the brownies?

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  9. Doing a happy dance right now. You're such a cool teacher! Including your kids in NaNo was brilliant, and you'll be thanked by one of them in the acknowledgements section of a book one day. Also, I love Bartimer. What a great name.

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    1. Lisa--If you met my students, you'd say THEY were cool. :)

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  10. I watched a video of a dog who ran around his fence to put his ball in the street, then back behind the fence to stand anxiously and pitifully. It worked. Passersby would stop and throw the wayward ball back over the fence for him. He did this all day.

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