The Pyrenees---Southern France

The Pyrenees---Southern France

Monday, September 27, 2010

A Delicious Ending---A Microfiction Story

          This is my microfiction story, based on this very haunting photo.



            She watched the waves, and thought how comforting it would be to succumb to their embrace.

         All it would take is a small shift, and she'd vanish.

         No one would miss her... 

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(If "characters" includes spaces, this is over the limit...Sorry if that is the case.)

12 comments:

  1. Hauntingly sad and beautifully written.

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  2. I like your story (even if you did go over the 140 character limit...LOL)
    I wonder how many people think of disappearing that way...I hope that lady changed her mind in the end...
    Have a great week. Cheers!

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  3. I'd miss her and I don't even know her. Sad!!!

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  4. Someone would miss her. She would likely be surprised if she knew who. People rarely know everyone they impact.

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  5. Sad, how many people feel like her, I wonder... Well done!

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  6. this is great one, but so sad! I hate to think that some people actually feel this way....

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  7. Aah...so sad, but a great MM :o)

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  8. Isn't it sad that some people really are like this. How sad but a wonderful MM :) Have a great rest of the week :)

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  9. How sad that she's even considering such a thing :(

    Well written, you captured the feeling.

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  10. Drowning not waving... Very sad, but very well written.

    Dave
    Dave Wrote This

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  11. Wow! Beautiful. Sad. Unfortunately so true about so many...

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